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Something in the Water

by M.J. Duncan

4.30 Goodreads
(1.4K ratings)

Why You'll Love This

Two women who have everything they need — and absolutely no room for each other — prove themselves spectacularly wrong.

  • Great if you want: a sapphic romance built on real adult lives and stakes
  • The experience: slow-burn tension that earns every moment of its payoff
  • The writing: Duncan layers character depth quietly — revelations sneak up on you
  • Skip if: you want fast romance — this one takes its time getting there

About This Book

Two women who have built exactly the lives they wanted—and never planned to need anything more. Kate Walker is a tenured engineering professor with a daughter she loves and a career she's earned. Carter Burke is an Olympic medalist turned college rowing coach, defined by her discipline and her devotion to the sport. Neither is looking. Neither expects what happens when they meet at the water's edge. What M.J. Duncan builds between them isn't a story about people falling despite themselves—it's about what it costs to want something you never accounted for, and whether a life you've carefully constructed has room to grow.

Duncan writes with steady, confident prose that earns its emotional moments rather than manufacturing them. The pacing trusts the reader, taking time to establish who these women are before asking you to believe in what they become to each other. At 458 pages, the novel has room to breathe, and it uses that space well—developing friendships, setting, and interiority with the same care it gives to the central relationship. The result is the kind of character-driven fiction where you finish knowing these people, not just their story.